What I'm scared of.

I learnt about what I need to use in my writing to make it exiting for the reader and to use my adjectives to describe my nouns. I also learnt how to use the time I was givin to complete my writing task and to learn how to not trust my brother this stoy is true. I enjoed writing this story because it reminded me when I got revenge on my brother and he was terriefied of me and my sisters I also enjoed geting a prank on my kitten too because he scared me to. I found it challengeing to remeber all of this but did because he scared me hard time and hopfully you don't get scared aswell. Next time i will do more paragrahps to get you into it evan more than exited I will also think better on my steems.