We were learning about how to make a moment in time about a Squirrel getting chased by a big Hawk but don't worry the Squirrel doesn't get eaten by the Hawk he just gets chased.
I enjoyed the music on the video and I enjoyed making my writing unbelievable and to post it on my amazing blog.
I found it hard to keep watching the video because I thought the Squirrel will get eaten by the Hawk but in the end the Squirrel was safe.
Next time I will describe more into my writing and write more paragraphs into my writing to get rangi o te wiki.
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